aefenglommung (aefenglommung) wrote,

An old camp song, finished

The first lines of this came to me years ago; the missing lines, just last week.

You fill up my senses
like an open-air sewer,
like a garbage dump burning,
like a skunk in the road,
like an overfull trash can,
like a teenager’s gym bag.
You fill up my senses,
please go take a bath.

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